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Oldarmourer
24th Aug 2020, 4:40 PM

dun-dun-duunnnnnn like dinner ;)

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megados
24th Aug 2020, 7:23 PM

He gon' git it now!

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StLOrca
24th Aug 2020, 11:09 PM

Led astray by the little head AGAIN.

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robnot
26th Aug 2020, 1:00 PM

sorta,, his job IS to guard the Princess.! giving him another is just stupid.

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Lousy palace guards

PriorKnowledge
25th Aug 2020, 9:24 AM

Wow, what poor palace guards they have. Not only did they let an intruder sneak in, they have no guards anywhere else so that the intruder can wander the halls without being caught.

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DizzasterJuice
25th Aug 2020, 11:19 AM

Earlier in the story we know that Sellah could see her dead mother Inkahra but Lennare could not. Also most of the Vang Gaer at Dalai could not see her but at least one could see her, at least in some form.

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Guesticus
25th Aug 2020, 10:18 AM

Why would Psycho-corpse go after Anna? It's the daughter she wants

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SteveO
25th Aug 2020, 12:00 PM

Guilt by association?

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robnot
26th Aug 2020, 12:57 PM

so.? the "King" wants someone to die.!!? you DON'T assign one to guard three.! Bolly's job is to guard the Princess.. period. he cant watch both.. you need guards outside each door... that way Bolly can personally check one , while someone is watching the other..

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DizzasterJuice
26th Aug 2020, 4:08 PM

Throughout most of the story Wrenna has had no personal guard. There are lots of guards all over the city as well as outside her home. There really wasn't any perceived threat. It was only after Khamon Nylah tried to take Wrenna hostage that Stollo assigned one to her.

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robnot
27th Aug 2020, 12:26 PM

ok,,, im applying my real world bodyguard experience (vip) to this...
your story,, you tell it.. :)

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Oldarmourer
31st Aug 2020, 10:08 AM

Different cultures, different planet, some displays are more acceptable than others, personal feelings of weakness if dependent on others, plot necessities, character exposition, mood setting, etc, etc :)

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