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DizzasterJuice
15th Jul 2019, 8:40 AM
And that's the end of that chapter.
Edit: Changed last frame(s).
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xpacetrue
15th Jul 2019, 10:59 AM
No, not willingly. They were literally brainwashed by Tyranos, using really advanced technology.
xpacetrue
15th Jul 2019, 11:03 AM
I don't think understand why the queen would give up on reclaiming their city so easily without at least waiting for a report on what happened. There was at least one survivor from the explosion... right?
Besides, their city is still standing (more or less)... isn't it? Or did it crumble to ruins? We aren't given good post-explosion view, so it's really hard to tell. But even if the inside was damaged, even if some of the buildings were reduced to rubble, I'm sure some of them remain standing.
DizzasterJuice
15th Jul 2019, 11:33 AM
You're right, I probably should have shown the city burning a bit more.
Even the best fire fighters in France couldn't stop Notre Dame from burning to the ground. Maybe Dhar-Dalai can be rebuilt but not anytime soon.
Since Taisei was with Meigumi when she escaped and he is now standing next to Yokai, we can assume she's been filled in on the details. Again, maybe I could've thrown in an extra frame there. Maybe I can split that last frame and fill in some details.
DizzasterJuice
15th Jul 2019, 1:30 PM
I changed the last frame and added one. I think it works a lot better. Thanks for the suggestion.
megados
15th Jul 2019, 1:21 PM
Well shite, I didn't think Signos was destroyed in the explosion. That makes it a whole new ballgame. It may be that he survived, but Tyranos wouldn't know that, and is already exploring "other avenues".
DizzasterJuice
16th Jul 2019, 4:18 PM
So in 5th frame: "We searched for survivors. No one else made it out."
Thracecius
16th Jul 2019, 2:11 PM
I still can't read the name Archibeque without wanting to replace it with barbeque. What's funny is that it is supposedly derived from an Old French word that means "archbishop".
Welp, back to the drawing board it would seem...
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