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DizzasterJuice
1st May 2019, 6:12 AM

I swear I don't know how much longer I can put up with this crappy new version of Daz. Anyway. I'll post a new incentive page soon to make up for being late again.

Edit: I added a new incentive page on the "Vote" button above. This one is some out-takes from last chapter.

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Garanhir
1st May 2019, 11:17 AM

Given the apparent circumstances, isn't he a bit over-dressed?

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DizzasterJuice
1st May 2019, 8:48 PM

Must have been a helluva party.

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Speedy Marsh
1st May 2019, 11:42 AM

The Keeper is lucky he wasn't sleeping in pee.

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Ok, now I want an iron horse, for those times when I don't feel like flying ~~Kirby's~~ my cloud dragon. Or, maybe I'll use the iron horse to get from my house to my secret cloud dragon hangar. No one would think to follow the rails, right?

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Speedy Marsh
1st May 2019, 12:26 PM

Finally reached the broken "next >" button. x( ;)

I've gotta say, this is one of the most well thought out works of fiction that I've ever read. And, the artwork is incredible! You have a gift for making the characters and the world come to life.

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Not connected to this page, but the other day, I got curious about the name "Stollo". I Googled it, and learned that in Italian, "stollo" is a pole used to form a haystack.

They erect a tall vertical shaft, and then pile hay around it to form a cone. Stollo seems like an appropriate name for the king, since he is a big "shaft", and because of the way he stockpiled supplies for the war. He's even kind of shaped like a well padded cone of hay. xD

Did you have that definition in mind, when you named the king?

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DizzasterJuice
1st May 2019, 8:55 PM

Thank you very much!
I honestly can't remember how I came up with Stollo.

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Speedy Marsh
3rd May 2019, 9:51 PM

Well, with the 4th dimensional stuff happening in the story, maybe the pole was named after the king. ;)

Maybe a member of Stollo's heavy cavalry examined one of the shiny portals too closely, and found himself in ancient Italy.

He did ok, for a while, until a mob of humans found him. When the humans started speaking in a strange language, and gestured at the pole around which he had gathered hay for his horse, he told the humans about King Stollo, and how Stollo had ordered the erection of a large number of the poles, for storage of hay for his horses.

The humans appeared to be deep in thought, and they repeated the word "stolo", as they they tied him to the pole, and set the hay alight. Sigh... Humans are so speciesist. xD

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Xerkus
1st May 2019, 1:44 PM

He is lucky it is the bucket on the table and not the one in the corner. Piss bucket is not the best way to wake up but probably deserved for drunk sleep on the work.

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