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view DizzasterJuice's profile

3rd May 2018, 11:54 AM

Subscriber Bonus Page -- Not part of the regular story.

Thanks to all my readers!

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3rd May 2018, 1:24 PM

awesome page

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3rd May 2018, 3:40 PM

Fantastic page thanks

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view chk's profile

3rd May 2018, 5:08 PM

Very cool.

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3rd May 2018, 6:20 PM

Incredibly awesome

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view DizzasterJuice's profile

4th May 2018, 11:59 AM

Thanks for all the compliments, and thanks to all the CF subscribers.

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view jamie59's profile

3rd May 2018, 8:31 PM

So the external circuitry completely inhibits her host. Would the lack cripple Essential's ability to fight the next time she needs to?

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3rd May 2018, 8:40 PM

Everyone's too distracted to answer.

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view DizzasterJuice's profile

4th May 2018, 12:08 PM

It only inhibits Essential's ability to monitor (or feel so to speak) those parts of the body, so now she has to rely on Crystyn more than she did.

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view Boren's profile

4th May 2018, 11:30 PM

Sounds like she needs an upgrade to some more subtle and ascetically pleasing sensors, hey I think I know who could help with that *whistles* hey Andrea over here...

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28th Apr 2019, 3:13 PM

She should've removed the sensors from one arm and the opposite leg. Then they both could've contributed and benefitted equally. ;D

Also, having full control of one arm and one leg, Essential could probably still fight circles around any fully biological warrior.

Of course, they might walk kinda wobbly, till they get in sync. But, I'm afraid she'll have to deal walking wobbly pretty often, anyway, after this page! xD

(The following are just my two-bit theories, and should be taken with an NaCl crystal)

I imagine that they share their full field of vision. If they each had control of one arm, they could work on seperate manual tasks, and focus their view on seperate areas of their field of vision.

I feel like the Crystyn and Essential are truly evolving into Unity. (though I'll really miss them, if they lose their ability to separate themselves into two personalities) :'(

At this point, I think they're still going through a "conjoined twins" stage, still learning to work together and trust each other. They each still control their seperate parts of their shared body.

When the last walls come down, and they trust each other completely, they will unite and all parts of her mind and body will function as one. There won't be a part of her that hides when the bad stuff happens. There won't be secrets she's keeping from herself.

There will be Unity.

And, heaven help any who stand against her.

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view Ryan_FLuX's profile

5th May 2018, 6:25 PM

Hahahahaha that is the best. Teaching her how to bang herself lollol

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