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DizzasterJuice
30th Apr 2018, 1:30 PM

Thanks to all of you CF subscribers. I'll post the bonus page this Thursday.

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robnot
30th Apr 2018, 4:35 PM

i subscribed back when you were on DC,,

jumpers ,, rabbits or frogs.?? im thinking rabbits..

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Slag
1st May 2018, 7:14 AM

Spiders

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DizzasterJuice
1st May 2018, 1:52 PM

To native Floridians, the term "jumpers" refers to freshwater shrimp, but that's not what it is. Wouldn't rabbits be "hoppers"?

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megados
30th Apr 2018, 5:42 PM

What could possibly go wrong?

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Alternatively, some character development.

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Tiger Tomcat
1st May 2018, 7:05 AM

Raodi sure changed the subject fast, when Mitri found out that she was a princess. And why do I have the feeling that this hunt is going to go very badly.

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Oldarmourer
1st May 2018, 1:14 PM

something interesting sort of has to or we're going to have to slip from story to cheescake pretty fast...not that that's a bad thing in itself but those two might not be the best for that...then again, how old are they in 'people years' ?

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DizzasterJuice
1st May 2018, 1:59 PM

Cheesecake is on Thursday, the rest of this chapter is kind of boring as far as action goes, other than some sword training. But it sets up the battle for Durga Seung and that's where things get intense.

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