DizzasterJuice
9th Apr 2018, 12:10 PM

Carrencia is more concerned with Mitri's feelings than she is with her own vindication.

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megados
9th Apr 2018, 4:27 PM

Re: A/N, that's a mark of a good person.

Who's our eavesdropper? I'm surprised Carri doesn't hear them talking. (Or maybe she does)

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DizzasterJuice
9th Apr 2018, 10:15 PM

You'll get to find out who she is on next page. =)

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zanquis
10th Apr 2018, 3:41 AM

Small question, but wasn't Carri also cut on her left hand?? or was that just a bit unfortunate angle making it look like that.

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Tiger Tomcat
10th Apr 2018, 10:30 PM

Wonder if Mitri will totally drop the Becky Thatcher act, or if she will continue to use it just as an affection.

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Speedy
28th Apr 2019, 8:01 AM

Mitri needed a big sister. (Eloma is Mom, I'd say)

Fair warning: If you kill off Carri or Mitri, your readers will help Tyranos destroy the universe, even if we have to do it one planet at a time.

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It's nice to see a Dalai idolizing members of another race. (Hochi doesn't count. He idolizes anything female. And hero worships Liam, because prophecy... and because human, i suppose)

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NN
9th Oct 2019, 11:12 PM

I am constantly amazed at how well you make their faces show emotion. Love this and whiteout, good job!

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