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DizzasterJuice
9th Apr 2018, 12:10 PM
Carrencia is more concerned with Mitri's feelings than she is with her own vindication.
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megados
9th Apr 2018, 4:27 PM
Re: A/N, that's a mark of a good person.
Who's our eavesdropper? I'm surprised Carri doesn't hear them talking. (Or maybe she does)
zanquis
10th Apr 2018, 3:41 AM
Small question, but wasn't Carri also cut on her left hand?? or was that just a bit unfortunate angle making it look like that.
DizzasterJuice
10th Apr 2018, 12:25 PM
Yes when she grabbed that spear, but it wasn't as bad as the stab wounds.
Zanquis
11th Apr 2018, 2:56 PM
K so I remembered correctly, was kinda expecting bandage there. But it might have been minor, though I wouldn’t recommend testing irl how badly those cuts are.
Tiger Tomcat
10th Apr 2018, 10:30 PM
Wonder if Mitri will totally drop the Becky Thatcher act, or if she will continue to use it just as an affection.
DizzasterJuice
11th Apr 2018, 11:41 PM
She experienced a very traumatic event at a young age. By pretending she's someone else, she doesn't have to re-live that event. But now that it's coming back to her she's realizing that she's going to have to face her demons.
Speedy
28th Apr 2019, 8:01 AM
Mitri needed a big sister. (Eloma is Mom, I'd say)
Fair warning: If you kill off Carri or Mitri, your readers will help Tyranos destroy the universe, even if we have to do it one planet at a time.
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It's nice to see a Dalai idolizing members of another race. (Hochi doesn't count. He idolizes anything female. And hero worships Liam, because prophecy... and because human, i suppose)
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NN
9th Oct 2019, 11:12 PM
I am constantly amazed at how well you make their faces show emotion. Love this and whiteout, good job!
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