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DizzasterJuice
29th Mar 2018, 8:57 AM

Bad timing Mitri.

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Karyl
29th Mar 2018, 9:01 AM

Dizz, about White Out- maybe just serial adventures, without trying to make a connection between stories would work for Bidi- more like a kid's stories approach than a novelist approach.

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DizzasterJuice
30th Mar 2018, 1:24 PM

I might do something like that but I need to finish the main story first.

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Jan
29th Mar 2018, 11:25 AM

Nice to see Carrensia recover from her wounds thx Dizz for saving her hehe

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DizzasterJuice
30th Mar 2018, 1:21 PM

I like Carri too much to kill her off that easy. =)

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jamie59
29th Mar 2018, 8:43 PM

Wrong 3 letter word. Try wet.

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DizzasterJuice
30th Mar 2018, 1:23 PM

Mitri can "screw up a wet dream".

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Speedy
28th Apr 2019, 6:54 AM

Unscrew, more like.

Cattus interruptus

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Was that Mitri's kitty transformation, last page? Cute little furball.

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SteveO
30th Mar 2018, 6:01 AM

It's that how it always works? You get woken up just when the dream is getting to the best part.

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DizzasterJuice
30th Mar 2018, 1:22 PM

I hate it when that happens.

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Tiger Tomcat
2nd Apr 2018, 2:59 AM

If looks could kill, Mitri would be bruised from waking Carri from her dream. 😁😊

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