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DizzasterJuice
18th Sep 2017, 8:53 AM

Hurricane Irma didn't do much physical damage here but internet is on and off now after being down a week. Hopefully it can stay on long enough to finish some new pages.

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Karyl
18th Sep 2017, 11:52 AM

Well, when you do post you manage a killer post! WOW! this should be interesting--and chills from the last panel.....brrrr...

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DizzasterJuice
19th Sep 2017, 10:29 AM

Thanks Karyl.
Some Mag Cheng guerrilla war tactics coming up.

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Jim Yencer
19th Sep 2017, 10:32 PM

Glad see you back and that you "weathered" the storm.
Regarding the incentive page. Isn't Mitki in a tight, skimpy, see-through top close to 'child porn"?

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DizzasterJuice
19th Sep 2017, 11:59 PM

No, quite a few chapters ago she became legal age and that was again confirmed later. I remember a discussion we had near the beginning of the story where we calculated her age as over 17 in Earth years which would make her about 19 now.

But you have a point that's still a bit young to be doing that kind of shot. I'll change that out on Thursday.

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