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Speedy
27th Apr 2019, 1:51 PM
Hey, a commander has got to give her troops a good tongue-lashing every now and then, to keep 'em in line.
And, if it weren't for Mina's daily inspections, the Vang Gaer would be a hot mess!
robnots
24th Apr 2017, 1:44 PM
? you don't read history?? jk.. quite a few generals brought stuff like that...
DizzasterJuice
25th Apr 2017, 9:18 AM
I'm sure a lot of them did, but not the ones that earned the respect of their men. Alexander the Great, who loved to smell nice, realized that perfume is more practical than a bath tub.
Anon
24th Apr 2017, 3:16 PM
um can we get a page reference to who that is lol
Steve O
25th Apr 2017, 8:45 AM
I recognized Mina H'Kosta, but that begs the question: Does that "Eloma?!" mean "Thank the gods you're alive" or "WTF are you doing still breathing? You're supposed to be dead.".
DizzasterJuice
25th Apr 2017, 9:21 AM
Remember that Carrencia said that every Minkie knows of Eloma and Liropia, but your answer is coming on next page.
Steve O
26th Apr 2017, 8:47 AM
Dizz, that's why I love your work, you always keep me wondering what's next.
xpacetrue
27th Apr 2017, 9:25 AM
@DizzasterJuice
Nice page. Sexy.
But, I'm confused. Isn't Mina H'Kosta supposed to be chocolate brown? At least, that's how she appears on page 304. But, on this page, she is clearly Caucasian. It does not bother me, either way... except for how I can't wrap my mind around the inconsistency. It's like you applied the stripes and mask tattoo on the wrong model, getting these two bathing beauties mixed up.
DizzasterJuice
27th Apr 2017, 10:01 AM
I make a template for each new character and only load scenes from the template so that I don't screw up. In this case I screwed up anyway and made changes after. On that page it looks like I made her darker for some reason.
Speedy
27th Apr 2019, 1:59 PM
@Xpacetrue - That would be terrible. Mina earned her stripes! xD
Stripey cats are stripey
xpacetrue
27th Apr 2017, 9:15 AM
Your stripey Vang Gaer commander reminds me of an interesting fact: Calico cats are almost always female because the locus of the gene for the orange/non-orange coloring is on the X chromosome.
Also, you may be interested in the Why Women Are Stripey video. It explains that if humans had skin that was expressed differently based on the X chromosome, women would be stripey, because they have two and how which X gets expressed or deactivated is random.
DizzasterJuice
27th Apr 2017, 10:10 AM
Interesting!
I know that most, if not all, pure white cats are male. I wonder if that's a similar condition or a total lack of color. I know that pure white cats are almost always deaf too.
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