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DizzasterJuice
22nd Oct 2015, 7:54 AM
They're back!
For the new readers, you can find out more about these guys in Chapter 10.
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DizzasterJuice
22nd Oct 2015, 9:10 AM
With her cybernetic limbs she doesn't move at all while she's aiming.
DizzasterJuice
22nd Oct 2015, 9:00 AM
I thought it was kind of predictable considering where we last saw Kirby and Vyrkola.
DizzasterJuice
22nd Oct 2015, 11:38 AM
It's only been 4 chapters. Mitri was gone twice as long before she came back into the story. Yokai was gone about the same time.
Maybe it's the way they just jumped in? So if I showed them hearing the screams in the distance first, then coming to help?
anifreik
25th Oct 2015, 5:53 AM
Yeah, hearing the screams then coming in would have helped ease them back into the story. The main thing for me is that while 4 chapters ago isn't long in comic time, irl it's been a pretty good while ago. Maybe it's just been too long since I did an archive dive?
xpacetrue
22nd Oct 2015, 1:44 PM
Caught with his pants down. Literally.
Freaky metal giant with glowing red eyes appeared out of thin air. Literally. I expect Becky... er, I mean Mitri to freak out aaaany time now. She's probably splattered with blood and/or brain matter.
Steven-Vincent
27th Oct 2015, 8:32 PM
Awesome decloak effect in that one panel. Very nice artwork as usual.
DizzasterJuice
27th Oct 2015, 10:08 PM
Thanks. That stealth effect is only 4 layers and not too hard to do as opposed to this one that I do for one of my other comics, Ghost Inferium, that is a lot more work.
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