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DizzasterJuice
30th Mar 2015, 10:52 PM

A preview of the graphic story "Downtime" only available on the Patreon page for Tier 2 and up.
Downtime is the continuing story of Kirby Gamble and Lt. Vyrkola from Chapter 10, caught up in a brutal civil war on the planet Il-Kyaar. This is a partial preview of page 5.

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Dongaria
30th Mar 2015, 11:08 PM

Lately I can't decide which of your characters are my favorites! So many good ones!

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DizzasterJuice
31st Mar 2015, 9:50 AM

You should go back and check out chapter 10 cuz Kirby is a real bad ass. Definitely my favorite.

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Guest
31st Mar 2015, 7:21 AM

2 arms and 2 legs too? is that standard?

As in, whenever they need more supersoldiers, if some poor soul comes in with a broken finger to the infirmary they get the full job done on them?

People will start waiting until they are puking their intestines to show their face around a military hospital...

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DizzasterJuice
31st Mar 2015, 9:48 AM

Page 172 explains it a little.

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Skweeee
31st Mar 2015, 1:12 PM

I'm not sure how much time has elapsed from her last training session together?

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DizzasterJuice
1st Apr 2015, 10:19 AM

Most of the story takes place while she's on a 48 leave the next day after she leaves the main story (chapter 10).

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moizmad
31st Mar 2015, 3:51 PM

I think Lindsey is hitting on her, good thing their not in Indiana.

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DizzasterJuice
1st Apr 2015, 10:25 AM

Every now and then some same sex relationships sneak their way into my stories, but anyone's sexuality it's never a relative part of the story. This is supposedly way in the future when we're passed all that stuff, so whatever happens, happens.

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