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DizzasterJuice
5th Jan 2015, 9:19 AM
I was attempting to make her skin look a little artificial and plastic, even a little gray in the extremities. I'm not sure if it works or not but my first version was more of a blue tint.
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moizmad
5th Jan 2015, 3:34 PM
I know, my place, nobody will ever look for her there! I'll only charge her 1/4 rent!
DizzasterJuice
5th Jan 2015, 5:42 PM
Vancouver does sound better then the catacombs but once she finds out that you'll have her cooking and cleaning I think she'll take her chances in the underworld. :P
DizzasterJuice
5th Jan 2015, 5:51 PM
Thanks. The Crease was in the top 25 last month so hopefully it can stay up there again. It would be nice if WhiteOut stays up there too but it usually drops off.
All the credit goes to you readers though. Thank you all very much.
xpacetrue
6th Jan 2015, 9:27 AM
I understand why you'd want to Borg-ify her somewhat. Though, I don't get why her skin should be plastic. IMO, her face resembles an android. Or like she had the skin on her face replaced.
But then, I'm probably biased. I often prefer subtle. And now I'm wondering what your first version looked like. :)
DizzasterJuice
6th Jan 2015, 10:49 AM
Her skin is not plastic, I just said I wanted it to look a little glossy like plastic and a little dead-ish in the extremities, like the blood circulation was temporarily disrupted. It will start looking more like real skin once the blood starts flowing again.
Her face, skin, and implants get explained on the next page.
The first version was more blue, like Star Trek Data color, but it looked too dead. I didn't want her looking like Mailyng up there. (no offense Mai) heheh
DizzasterJuice
6th Jan 2015, 10:26 PM
Yeah they could have picked a better looking actress for the borg queen but the disassembled borg queen sequence was pretty cool with the spine and all.
Dongaria
7th Jan 2015, 12:19 AM
This page rules. I love the way you made her face look vaguely puppet like to suggest her origins.
DizzasterJuice
7th Jan 2015, 7:17 PM
Thanks. Her textures were a lot harder to make than they look but it was worth it the extra effort I think.
Vulnerable
HiFranc
19th Aug 2015, 4:43 PM
Now that Tyranos's Diagnostic and Repair Program is no longer in his body, he cannot fix himself after attack. His only hope is that the engineer (I forget her name) will maintain him. That means he's vulnerable to attack if she refuses to help and/or cannot help him in time.
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