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DizzasterJuice
18th Sep 2014, 8:20 AM
Today's incentive page is the uncut original of the last frame where Eloma shows a bit more.
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DizzasterJuice
18th Sep 2014, 10:14 PM
Liri is a consistently strong personality, but Eloma, not so much. She has a few weak moments.
woohooligan
18th Sep 2014, 12:48 PM
You always have to wonder what the villains are thinking when they say these things. "Oh wait, you mean, I'm somehow mind-controlling you into torturing my friend? My god! I'm a monster!" :P
DizzasterJuice
18th Sep 2014, 10:17 PM
The dogs have been playing head games and good-cop/bad-cop with them since they arrived.
Dragonrider
18th Sep 2014, 1:32 PM
I would seem Sir Liam needs to hurry a bit if he is to rescue his Lady Love.
BongMeesteR
26th Sep 2014, 10:20 AM
Fantastic page as always Dizz. Your storyline and atwork impresses me to no end. Have you read "The Chronicles of Zona"?
Sorry to be pedantic, but it's "iMpatient"
DizzasterJuice
26th Sep 2014, 10:52 AM
Thank you very much!
I've seen "The Chronicles of Zona" before but never read it.
I always welcome an extra set of eyes for spelling errors - I'll fix it when I get home later.
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