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DizzasterJuice
18th Sep 2014, 8:20 AM
Today's incentive page is the uncut original of the last frame where Eloma shows a bit more.
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DizzasterJuice
18th Sep 2014, 10:14 PM
Liri is a consistently strong personality, but Eloma, not so much. She has a few weak moments.
woohooligan
18th Sep 2014, 12:48 PM
You always have to wonder what the villains are thinking when they say these things. "Oh wait, you mean, I'm somehow mind-controlling you into torturing my friend? My god! I'm a monster!" :P
DizzasterJuice
18th Sep 2014, 10:17 PM
The dogs have been playing head games and good-cop/bad-cop with them since they arrived.
Dragonrider
18th Sep 2014, 1:32 PM
I would seem Sir Liam needs to hurry a bit if he is to rescue his Lady Love.
DizzasterJuice
26th Sep 2014, 10:52 AM
Thank you very much!
I've seen "The Chronicles of Zona" before but never read it.
I always welcome an extra set of eyes for spelling errors - I'll fix it when I get home later.
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