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DizzasterJuice
18th May 2020, 9:11 PM

What Rikki is referring to is known as a Alcubierre drive.

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jamie59
18th May 2020, 9:43 PM

So no one is truly human here.

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Dragonrider
19th May 2020, 3:25 AM

Where did this behemoth come from? All the jumping in and out between several story lines is maxi confusing to say the least. This series is getting almost too much to follow. Last time Liam was around flying tech he was in one of the scout pods from the original ship. How about cutting out or merging some of the story lines either that or all updates are not published to all subscribers.

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DizzasterJuice
19th May 2020, 8:28 AM

That"behemoth" was covered and shown dozens times before in the story going all the way back to page 156.

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Guesticus
19th May 2020, 10:39 AM

Will agree that it can get confuzzleating at times, that just means having to re-read such a wonderful story :D

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Stankl
19th May 2020, 11:26 AM

I vote with Guesticus

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One-eyed Mike
19th May 2020, 5:55 PM

I agree that this has been seen before. However, it might be good to sneak in a bit of exposition, when there's a long gap. "OH, THERE'S THAT THING THAT WE DISCUSSED, AND I SEE IT'S STILL DOING THE THING WITH THE OTHER THING."

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DizzasterJuice
21st May 2020, 9:58 AM

You do have a point. I usually add a short location dialogue when I change locations but I forgot. Corrected.

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Thracecius
20th May 2020, 2:13 PM

Welcome back! Nice page, and certainly more than I was expecting, storywise and artwise.

Referring back to the previous page, I agree with Visioneer that it'd be cool to take a look at the website or forum for the game you're working on, if it exists.

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DizzasterJuice
21st May 2020, 10:00 AM

Right now I've only been posting that info on patreon but once we get farther along we'll have some kind of fundraising page.

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Oldarmourer
21st May 2020, 8:48 AM

Don't worry, I'll never complain about being given extra stuff ;)
If I don't remember where it fits it gives me an excuse to go skinny dipping in the archives...

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Some Guy
21st May 2020, 1:26 PM

Same. For example, I have no idea/memory who Rikki is, where she came from, what she's doing there, etc. And she's not listed in the character archive.

Perhaps if I were better at distinguishing between characters (not just in this comic - it's a constant thing I deal with in a lot of the comics I read), but I'm not, so...

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DizzasterJuice
21st May 2020, 6:32 PM

How could you forget the intros of K'hiki and Rikalla? =)

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That building/station

trwolf2k
26th May 2020, 7:23 PM

It reminds me of the old Galactic Civilization game from a bit back. Mostly just the color scheme and shapes though, I always went with blue highlights.

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