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DizzasterJuice
12th Jan 2021, 7:08 AM

The last time we saw this kid he was just a baby. My how fast they grow, especially Minkie cats.

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thing1
12th Jan 2021, 12:03 PM

a clear sign this story has gone on too long.

great work as usual. ;-)

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DizzasterJuice
13th Jan 2021, 1:18 AM

Thank you very much!

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Ryan_FLuX
12th Jan 2021, 12:07 PM

Hey juice! Great page, I like this amazonian jungle world you put together!

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DizzasterJuice
13th Jan 2021, 1:18 AM

Thanks Ryan.
I've noticed there's some new Trixy Sparks episodes up so I have to get caught up some time soon. =)

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xpacetrue
12th Jan 2021, 10:52 PM

Is that the child between Yokai and Liam? Holy...! He's already that big and can already talk like that?! Surely, less than a year has passed since they did the deed. Apparently, Dalai DNA tends to be dominant in Human-Dalai hybrids (Minkie). Because Humans sure don't mature that fast.

If they grow that fast, I'm surprised that Mala haven't already out-populated their enemies to the point of easily being able to crush them.

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DizzasterJuice
13th Jan 2021, 1:13 AM

Yep, that's Liam's son.

On this planet they don't measure years by seasons because they are fairly close to the equator and have no seasons. So instead they measure age by the Angurad which circumnavigates the planet every 2 rotations of their star or 2.5 Earth years.

He was conceived during the last Angurad and the next one is almost upon them so he's about 2 Earth Years old.

Both cats and dogs mature very quickly during their first 2 years so a 12 month old cat would be equivalent to about a 15 year old human. Later they slow to about 4 "cat years" equals 1 human year.

Mala and Dalai have slightly higher development than humans in their first few years, so he's 2 Earth Years old but has developed to the level of maybe a 5 year old human.

Remember that every culture on this planet has its own form of population control (except Mag Leung). The Minkie's have a gender separated society where the men go to sea at an early age. They come home every Angurad (2.5 Earth Years) and that's when most children are conceived.

Carrencia briefly described this event and it wasn't a pleasant experience for her.

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DizzasterJuice
14th Jan 2021, 3:51 PM

After reviewing my notes I realize I kinda screwed up the math here but the point is the same, they grow faster in the first few years.

It's 1.5, not 2.5

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Guest
13th Jan 2021, 1:34 AM

Great episode! Love the playful interaction with Kirby and the princeling.
And that eye-shadowish fur effect on the lady with her left scalp shaved is great too!

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DizzasterJuice
14th Jan 2021, 4:22 PM

Thanks!
Aratani "The Untamed" is a bad-ass. =)

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Boren
13th Jan 2021, 11:24 AM

So many works of fiction contain a lot of sexual content, so few ever go into the potential results of such content. You have impressed me yet again Dizz. Big thumbs up!

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DizzasterJuice
14th Jan 2021, 4:24 PM

Thank you very much!

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Raznaak
13th Jan 2021, 11:46 AM

Huh. It seemed to me that like barely a few weeks or perhaps months have passed, but apparently almost two Terran years have passed.
Weird.

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DizzasterJuice
14th Jan 2021, 4:03 PM

I have been told before that I don't convey the passage of time very well in this story and I somewhat agree. I attempted to show age progression especially in the Minkie kits.

I did make a mistake in the previous comment, it's 1.5 Earth years per season, not 2.5.

The Minkie kits Mitri, Wrenna, Kass, and Bolly are now 12 seasons old or equivalent to 18 years old on Earth.

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Oldarmourer
19th Jan 2021, 3:26 PM

It's always hard when there are multiple storylines with concurrent or overlapping timeframes that have to be jammed together, not to mention flashbacks and historical background bits, but I think it's working out pretty good so far.
The readers have to do their part too and that's where the archive comes in :)

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Oldarmourer
19th Jan 2021, 3:27 PM

So Mitri, Wrenna, Kass and Bolly are 'legal' now ? ;)

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