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DizzasterJuice
2nd Jun 2020, 5:53 AM

And that's it for that chapter.

I doubt I'll be on a regular schedule until my work load lightens up but I am trying.

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DizzasterJuice
2nd Jun 2020, 6:02 AM

Unity is saying that there is a lot of different possible timelines on Earth, such as when her arm appeared as a dinosaur-like creature, however a feline timeline is extremely unlikely and very likely on the planet they are on.

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xpacetrue
3rd Jun 2020, 11:25 AM

Hmm... This just brings up more questions.

Crystyn theorizes that the Human-Kyaar alliance used DNA from "this planet" to engineer Liam and other supposedly human supersoldiers - Dalai DNA, apparently.

But this is supposed to be an undiscovered world that does not have a Human or Kyaar presence and is not listed on any map. It is something of a hyperspace trap where ships get lost. Even if it was before Tyranos was capturing ships, I don't see ships making it back to alliance-controlled space within a lifetime, since there is no hyperspace path or whatever.

Wouldn't it make more sense to theorize that the Human-Kyaar supersoldier program created "human" supersoldiers with some Kyaar DNA and that the Kyaar evolved from cat-like creatures?

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DizzasterJuice
3rd Jun 2020, 10:04 PM

Colinization of other planets was a one way trip until there was a statite array built on both ends of the route. Originally humans sent out colony projects to several prospect planets. This planet, Gliese 832 (Celebus), was one of those candidate planets. Thousands of humans were sent here and they lived with the Dalai in the city of Dhar-Dalai. Then the Mag Leung war happened. Most of the human colonists were killed, the Dalai were driven from their home city, and the human/Dalai hybrids (Mag Mala) fled to the south.

The Earth Federation determined that there was insufficient land mass to support a colony without further conflict and at the time two way travel to other colonies such as Gliese 667 had been established, so the colony efforts on Celebus were abandoned. The planet is considered as a candidate for an oceanic colony at a future date.

Some exploration ships such as the Demetrius were built with NZM engines that created a field where mass is greatly reduced called near-zero-mass. They were a much slower method of travel than the statite arrays so were used as a solution to round trip exploration only. One of these ships could make the trip back from Celebus in less than 50 years with a crew in stasis. The Demetrius may be a way home if they can avoid the guns of the Acheron currently under control of Tyranos.

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megados
2nd Jun 2020, 10:29 AM

Ohhhh, revelation! :D

Nitpick: In panel 2, Unity says . . . "come back to her is she gets her hands on" . . . should be if?

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DizzasterJuice
2nd Jun 2020, 11:29 AM

Oops... corrected. Thanks.

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Oldarmouer
2nd Jun 2020, 11:19 AM

Dun-dun-DUUUNNNN !!!

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Oldarmourer
2nd Jun 2020, 11:19 AM

or other expositional music stinger of your choice ;)

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Musical Stinger!

stormbringer77
2nd Jun 2020, 11:40 PM

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Oldarmourer
3rd Jun 2020, 1:17 PM

the force is strong with this one...

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Zanquis
3rd Jun 2020, 3:58 AM

Looks like someone had a great nap.

Always good oppertunities for vote-incentive ;)

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Guesticus
3rd Jun 2020, 7:51 AM

And to continue "The Adventures of Bidi and BooBi" :D

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Terry Romphf
18th Jun 2020, 8:38 PM

It's been a while since I've seen a new page. Any idea when I might expect one?

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Guest
23rd Jun 2020, 6:44 PM

It hasn't been that long, give him a break.

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Terry Romphf
9th Jul 2020, 6:26 AM

It does seem like a very long time because I'm really loving the story and am worried that it may be abandoned at some point. I guess I'll just keep checking once in a while and hoping for new content. I do know what busy schedules are like so I'll just have to be patient.

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Quieteyes
28th Jun 2020, 9:48 AM

With an outfit like that, she really needs to be careful with the overhead stretch. :-)

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Oldarmourer
9th Jul 2020, 12:57 PM

No...no she doesn't

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SteveO
30th Jun 2020, 6:25 AM

How are you doing Dizz? Aren't you in one of those states where Covid is raging?

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Kriegsmann55
15th Jul 2020, 5:07 PM

If Memory serves they are in Florida. I hope they're well.

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SteveO
16th Jul 2020, 7:21 AM

Florida is the new New York.

I think he's got a bolt hole out in the woods he's been hiding in.

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DizzasterJuice
26th Jul 2020, 10:34 PM

Actually it's not even close to NY numbers. To top it off the CDC admitted to counting pneumonia and flu cases as covid cases so out of the 90k recent cases reported by the CDC only 11k were legit.

And yes, I've been at my cabin in the woods away from the crazy people.

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Hope all is well

JiggilyJoe
15th Jul 2020, 8:20 PM

Wow. I just read through your entire archive. Amazing work! Then I noticed that you haven't posted in a month and a half. I hope all is well with you.

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JSStryker
16th Jul 2020, 12:28 AM

Unfortunately his workload at his other job i interfering with his ability to post new material on a regular basis.

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DizzasterJuice
26th Jul 2020, 11:30 PM

Thanks! Yeah I've been known to take a break or two when real life gets in the way.

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11th Doctor
26th Jul 2020, 2:43 PM

Yeah, he's had similar gaps if you look at the dates of the submissions. This isn't a very long wait compared to previous ones.

That said though, good luck Dizz, hope you're okay.

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