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DizzasterJuice
21st Oct 2019, 3:54 PM

Sorry for running a little late today.

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DizzasterJuice
28th Oct 2019, 11:33 AM

10/28: Running late today as usual... sorry.

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Thracecius
21st Oct 2019, 4:46 PM

Well, I think Hochi has sufficiently impressed the rebelliously brave little lady of the evening. Nothing could possibly go wrong with that bit of flirtation. ;)

Late? Uhh, yeah, sure...but I just read it now so it's not? :D

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jamie59
21st Oct 2019, 8:34 PM

Hochi careful she might give you something you'll never loose.

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xpacetrue
22nd Oct 2019, 3:02 AM

That Hochi! Such a skirt chaser. XD

Excellent page. Except... Is that a bright white glare I see on the supposedly stone floor of the last panel (behind Carrencia's left leg)? Even if wet from rain, it shouldn't look like that. The glare makes it look like it is perfectly flat instead of a cobblestone floor.

Getting the lighting perfect in each scene and for each necessary shot/camera angle is probably one of the most difficult things. At least, it sounds like it is from what I read. But were you a little rushed yesterday to get it out?

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DizzasterJuice
25th Oct 2019, 3:08 AM

Yeah I don't know what that is but now that you mentioned it, it's bugging the hell out of me. It's probably specularity or reflection set too high on the mud puddle.

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Guesticus
25th Oct 2019, 10:56 AM

Not 'perfectly flat' or polished, just pitted and covered with puddles (which tend to create flat surfaces unless disturbed)
The white light could be from the moon

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Kriegsmann55
23rd Oct 2019, 8:27 AM

Hochi and Milolli incentive page when?

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jawbone
24th Oct 2019, 10:02 AM

Anything more focused would be almost painfully delightful. They do make a cute couple.

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DizzasterJuice
25th Oct 2019, 3:09 AM

Hmmm... maybe.

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Guesticus
25th Oct 2019, 10:59 AM

Did the other girls' hair grow in the last panel?
In the previous panel, her hair barely reaches as long as her nipples, butt last panel it grew to completely cover it with plenty left over

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DizzasterJuice
28th Oct 2019, 11:35 AM

Modifiers for 3d models, (morphs) that bend usually make the model longer so there's not much I can do about it.

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Oldarmourer
28th Oct 2019, 1:11 PM

Her longer tresses got caught for a moment on the small dagger hidden inside the hairdo on the back of her head then slipped free in the last panel...gotchacovered ;)

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A Nony Mouth
29th Oct 2019, 1:06 PM

That Hochi is pretty sly. He'll be getting the bang for the bucking the guard gave her.

If Hochi doesn't hang on tight, he might get thrown in under 8 seconds. It's not Milolli's first rodeo. xD

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jawbone
30th Oct 2019, 12:07 PM

She looks at him as if she wouldn't want to buck him off

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Combat Medic Z
31st Oct 2019, 9:30 PM

Who can blame Hochi, really? Milolli is smoking hot!

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JSStryker
1st Nov 2019, 12:51 AM

Black haired girl "It is not safe for you here"

Carri "Why?"

Black haired girl "You are overdressed"

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