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DizzasterJuice
15th Jul 2019, 8:40 AM

And that's the end of that chapter.

Edit: Changed last frame(s).

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Guesticus
15th Jul 2019, 9:10 AM

Wait, are those humans <I>willingly</I> working with that pile of cyber-nuts? o_O

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xpacetrue
15th Jul 2019, 10:59 AM

No, not willingly. They were literally brainwashed by Tyranos, using really advanced technology.

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xpacetrue
15th Jul 2019, 11:03 AM

I don't think understand why the queen would give up on reclaiming their city so easily without at least waiting for a report on what happened. There was at least one survivor from the explosion... right?

Besides, their city is still standing (more or less)... isn't it? Or did it crumble to ruins? We aren't given good post-explosion view, so it's really hard to tell. But even if the inside was damaged, even if some of the buildings were reduced to rubble, I'm sure some of them remain standing.

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DizzasterJuice
15th Jul 2019, 11:33 AM

You're right, I probably should have shown the city burning a bit more.

Even the best fire fighters in France couldn't stop Notre Dame from burning to the ground. Maybe Dhar-Dalai can be rebuilt but not anytime soon.

Since Taisei was with Meigumi when she escaped and he is now standing next to Yokai, we can assume she's been filled in on the details. Again, maybe I could've thrown in an extra frame there. Maybe I can split that last frame and fill in some details.

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Garanhir
15th Jul 2019, 12:01 PM

Or maybe modify the frame in the last posting to show both of them escaping before the flames instead of just her?

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Garanhir
15th Jul 2019, 12:03 PM

Woops! Sorry; wrong cat!

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DizzasterJuice
15th Jul 2019, 1:30 PM

I changed the last frame and added one. I think it works a lot better. Thanks for the suggestion.

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megados
15th Jul 2019, 1:21 PM

Well shite, I didn't think Signos was destroyed in the explosion. That makes it a whole new ballgame. It may be that he survived, but Tyranos wouldn't know that, and is already exploring "other avenues".

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Zanquis
15th Jul 2019, 4:55 PM

No search party for any possible survivors?

It feels they give up on them very fast.

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DizzasterJuice
16th Jul 2019, 4:18 PM

So in 5th frame: "We searched for survivors. No one else made it out."

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thing 1
15th Jul 2019, 8:44 PM

well that's one way to tie up a story thread.

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SteveO
15th Jul 2019, 8:57 PM

Wait until TYRANOS figures out that the chip is still in a living body and that body is being shared by his former maintenance program.

I guess Unity didn't have to worry about destroying the brain interface machine, it's buried under a whole city now.

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Thracecius
16th Jul 2019, 2:11 PM

I still can't read the name Archibeque without wanting to replace it with barbeque. What's funny is that it is supposedly derived from an Old French word that means "archbishop".

Welp, back to the drawing board it would seem...

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