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DizzasterJuice
9th Jul 2018, 7:18 PM

Sorry I'm a bit late on today's page.

So now we know pretty much what the next chapter is about...

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megados
10th Jul 2018, 9:16 AM

Coming up with a plan on a shoestring!

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DizzasterJuice
10th Jul 2018, 1:01 PM

They'll hash out the details later.

I probably should've broken this part up into 3 pages instead of 2 but I thought it would be too boring if I did. But I guess I crammed too much info on one page doing it this way. Oh well.

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megados
10th Jul 2018, 10:18 PM

It didn't seem crammed; more like a brainstorming session. The shoestring comment was referring to their having a little timely information, and being able to piece a plan together with it.

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DizzasterJuice
13th Jul 2018, 1:11 PM

Originally there was a bit more reaction from a few people about having an "alien implant" in Unity's brain but I cut it. Unity does elaborate later.

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megados
13th Jul 2018, 11:04 PM

Actually, then, (and it's only my opinion) it's as it should be. Unity is a unique creature, and it would appear 'contrived' for them to react, since her outward appearance already speaks of many possibilities, and it would seem that it wouldn't be that unexpected.

Now any discussion of implants can stand on it's own, and not impinge on their plan formulation. :D

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SteveO
11th Jul 2018, 7:31 AM

Since no battle plan survives first contact with the enemy, it will interesting to see how this plays out.

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DizzasterJuice
13th Jul 2018, 1:08 PM

I'm sure there's going to be a few plan revisions.

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Zanquis
12th Jul 2018, 3:46 AM

That last shot really shows how small carri is compared to the rest.

She almost looks like a kid compared to the rest.. (Luckily we have a great vote incentive to remind her she definitly is not)

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DizzasterJuice
13th Jul 2018, 1:07 PM

She really is a shorty huh. Liam is about 6'2" and Kirby and Unity are both tall for women.

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robnot
13th Jul 2018, 5:57 PM

heh,, let me guess Carri about 5'2"..
my partner iz 6'4" an im 5'2" an we are comparable heights as Carri an Liam...

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