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DizzasterJuice
25th Jun 2018, 1:58 PM

Eloma chooses to see the good in everyone. She sees Stollo doing something nice for Bolly, even though she knows he's lying about Broqa.

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Tiger Tomcat
25th Jun 2018, 12:36 PM

That treachous dog Stollo can't stop scheming even when trying to repair relations with his daughter. 😐😕😠

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DizzasterJuice
25th Jun 2018, 2:01 PM

Stollo knows that Bolly is one of the few people that wouldn't hesitate to give his life to save his daughter.

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Zanquis
25th Jun 2018, 4:19 PM

Not only that, but any other bodyguard will feel like forced company that she will shake off.
She will not be able to shake off bolly that easily as he knows her for years.

Therefore Bolly she will more likely try to persuade to come along, as she will go anyway on adventure.

It is a win-win for the King, a good act and a bodyguard your daughter will accept better than most others.

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DizzasterJuice
25th Jun 2018, 11:13 PM

Good point.

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Anonymouth
28th Apr 2019, 5:59 PM

Plus, Wrenna and Kass probably have a totally different opinion of Bolly, now. Instead of the annoying little twerp that just wants to hump Kass whenever he has a chance, he's now the total badass that risked his life to save Wrenna.

They're not gonna wanna shake him off. Like Zanquis was saying they're gonna seek him out. Their tank will be the first party member they choose for every quest.

Plus, Wrenna is at the age where she might start fooling around. If she happens to get knocked up, it would look best if it was with the hero that saved her life. A member of the Vang Gaer and a hero of the kingdom would make a fine husband for her, even if Wrenna, Bolly, and Kass hated the idea. A royal wedding and a newborn heir to the Stollo bloodline would look good for the king.

In their culture, there would probably be no shame in Bolly getting her pregnant. In fact, I bet most of the commoners hope she'll thank him physically. ;) :p

I can imagine Kass and Wrenna thanking Bolly with a one time threesome, on the night before he leaves for his training, and then both Kass and Wrenna's shock, when Wrenna discovers she's pregnant.

And, imagine the look of shock on Bolly's face, when in the middle of his training, he hears a loud voice, reading a proclamation from King Stollo, announcing his joy at the news of the engagement of his beloved daughter to Sir Bolly H'Babbock, Warrior of the Vang Gaer, Witch Slayer, Heroic Savior of Her Royal Highness, Princess Wrenna Stollo.

(Lol. I meant to make a quick comment about how Kass and Wrenna like Bolly, now, and how King Stollo could have even more nauseating schemes in mind, and I ended up writing really terrible fanfic.) xD

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jamie59
25th Jun 2018, 7:01 PM

That slimy bastard ain't changing his strips.

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DizzasterJuice
25th Jun 2018, 11:14 PM

I knew I should have given him stripes =)

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megados
25th Jun 2018, 11:14 PM

Say what you want about him, Stollo knows how to play the game.

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DizzasterJuice
26th Jun 2018, 7:10 AM

yeah he does

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Smoothkat
26th Jun 2018, 4:55 AM

Out of curiosity she lost her wife during the Rescue Mission but then she also fall in love with Liam. If she has how many women to date are now in love with him and how many are going to carry or carrying his baby. Cause I'm kinda rooting for Liri and Carrencia

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DizzasterJuice
26th Jun 2018, 7:24 AM

Eloma was never in love with Liam.
Currently only Liri is in love with him and Carrencia may be as well.

Liam has only had sex with 2 women, Liri and Yokai, but Yokai didn't want anything to do with him after.

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Smoothkat
26th Jun 2018, 1:15 PM

I remember that during their initial meeting at that dinner that they had the palace she was kind of eyeballing him and during their captivity she was thinking about him also.

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DizzasterJuice
26th Jun 2018, 2:52 PM

She was flattered that he remembered something she told him about the meaning of her name. Sometimes when people are in a relationship they will fantasize about someone else, but that doesn't mean they would act on it.
During their captivity, Eloma said she didn't have the faith in Liam that Liri did.

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FjolsvithAase
26th Jun 2018, 8:51 AM

I just love Eloma's hairstyle!

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DizzasterJuice
26th Jun 2018, 2:55 PM

She's changed her hairstyle a few times in the story but I think she's keeping this one.

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xpacetrue
26th Jun 2018, 10:05 PM

That scheming devil! Will he ever get his comeuppance or bite off more than he can chew?

This incident reminds me of how he called for a messenger for status of how his troops fared shortly before meeting with Queen Yokai. She was upset over the sudden change in plans and the seeming betrayal (and, of course, he knew she would be). He timed it so that the messenger with the bad news of his losses came during his meeting.

In this case, he called for Bolly shortly before this planned meeting with Eloma, knowing that this deed and his carefully chosen words would sway her to his side.

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DizzasterJuice
28th Jun 2018, 3:07 PM

He definitely has a skill for manipulating people.

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