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Gilrandir
1st Dec 2016, 9:53 AM

Very nice, thank you. I am unsure about one thing, though: Carri objects when Unity proposes they split up, but then endorses a similar proposal (albeit with a caution) a few moments later when Liam suggests the same thing? That seemed ... abrupt to me.

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DizzasterJuice
1st Dec 2016, 10:47 AM

Seems all out hypocritical to me.
On the previous page they had already discussed splitting up. Carri is protesting that Unity is doing her own thing, but is actually more concerned about something entirely different.

More to come on that subject.

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Gilrandir
1st Dec 2016, 11:06 AM

Fair enough. Layers. ^_^

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anifreik
1st Dec 2016, 3:16 PM

Heh, she just doesn't want Unity taking off with "her" Liam :P

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DizzasterJuice
6th Dec 2016, 12:42 AM

That may be part of it too.

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Z74
2nd Dec 2016, 3:21 AM

I like the way that there are two identities in one character , I have a character like that only he's possessed by an alien and argues with himself all day

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DizzasterJuice
6th Dec 2016, 12:41 AM

In this case she's possessed by a sentient A.I. program.

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