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DizzasterJuice
3rd Nov 2016, 9:44 AM

As promised, horse's view on incentive page.

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Begalund
3rd Nov 2016, 11:15 AM

Thusly incentivized.

(comment from rogue's gallery)
("shouldn't there be a tunnel there?")
("why are you looking for the tunnel?")
("uhm...")
("right. now shut up.")

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DizzasterJuice
3rd Nov 2016, 5:05 PM

I turned her around 180 so there would be a nice background instead of a black tunnel. I didn't think anyone would mind. ;)

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Dragonrider
3rd Nov 2016, 3:33 PM

Mitri needs to practice her seduction skills, they should never have gotten to sleep fully clothed and unsatisfied.

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DizzasterJuice
3rd Nov 2016, 5:07 PM

More hero worship rather than seduction I think.

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Dragonrider
3rd Nov 2016, 6:28 PM

No I think our little cat girl is just plain in heat

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xpacetrue
3rd Nov 2016, 8:09 PM

During "a few hours later..." did these two share their stories of what happened since they last saw each other? If they did, then did Kirby relate how her team mates were killed by a freak'n huge "monster of metal" that "breathed fire" (energy beams) and how she and her team defeated it?

I hope Mitri gets the story right. Because I get the feeling that Kirby, Liam and all the rest are making history. And someone needs to write it down...

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DizzasterJuice
3rd Nov 2016, 9:15 PM

You're right, that was a bit unclear. I added one line "you did all that?" to make it clearer what they were talking about during that few hours. Mitri is easily impressed by the deeds of the off-worlders.

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jamie59
3rd Nov 2016, 8:34 PM

I see fast friends. In a few years with benefits maybe.

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DizzasterJuice
3rd Nov 2016, 9:31 PM

11.5 seasons (Angurad) which comes every other year would mean she is 23 Celebus years X 277 days in their calendar /365 days in our calendar = ~18 earth years.

12th season is when the Minkies become eligible to participate in the celebration that Carri spoke of earlier in the story, when all the men come home from sea and... celebrate.

Also 12th season is when the young men like Bolly get shipped off to sea.

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Tahg
4th Nov 2016, 8:40 AM

Is the day there assumed to be the same duration as an Earth day? (Cause that wouldn't necessarily be the case). Also her physiological age is probably more important than her physical age, so while an appropriate drinking age might be late teens for most humans, who knows what it'd be for her. And yes, I do read a fair bit of fiction about other species and planets, why do you ask? =P

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