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DizzasterJuice
10th Oct 2016, 7:41 AM

That pretty much sums up the case for Carri's innocence.
And that's the end of that chapter.

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Steven-Vincent
10th Oct 2016, 9:39 AM

That last panel is gorgeous. I love how you do the sky work.

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DizzasterJuice
10th Oct 2016, 3:54 PM

Thank you!
The sunrise in that panel kind of symbolizes hope and a new day for Mitri. She can move on now.

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txinaz
10th Oct 2016, 10:16 AM

the wrongs you do in this life can come back to haunt you

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DizzasterJuice
10th Oct 2016, 3:59 PM

So true. And at least Mitri didn't have to do the killing. The poor girl has suffered enough. She shouldn't have to suffer the guilt of killing someone, even if it was for revenge.

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Jan
10th Oct 2016, 10:54 AM

very good story, is it the ghostmother in the background in the last panel?

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DizzasterJuice
10th Oct 2016, 4:01 PM

Mother is sneaking off into the shadows again.

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Dragonrider
10th Oct 2016, 11:45 AM

Excellent page DIZ well done my friend, well done indeed.

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DizzasterJuice
10th Oct 2016, 4:01 PM

Thank you very much!

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jamie59
10th Oct 2016, 8:13 PM

Mitri this is something you can't undo. Are you ready to live with this for the rest of your life.

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DizzasterJuice
13th Oct 2016, 9:18 AM

That's just it. She didn't have to kill her, but she got to know that she is dead.

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Sleel
11th Oct 2016, 12:27 PM

(In the voice of the Jarl of Whiterun when you agree to take his axe to Ulfric) Good. Goood. *nods*

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DizzasterJuice
13th Oct 2016, 9:24 AM

"Skyrim belongs to the Nords!"

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Twistedfro
12th Oct 2016, 9:23 PM

I was away for a bit but I'm back again! awesome ending! Karma is a biatch!

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DizzasterJuice
13th Oct 2016, 9:25 AM

And I bet you're happy to find out that Carrencia is innocent. :D
Welcome back!

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Superb

Mohit
13th Oct 2016, 5:44 AM

Excellent story with good charactery

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DizzasterJuice
13th Oct 2016, 9:25 AM

Thank you very much!

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