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Dragonrider
22nd Aug 2016, 3:16 PM

Uhhh Ooopsie?

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moizmad
22nd Aug 2016, 4:29 PM

I told ya, I told ya! Don't these people watch movies....never assume the bad guy is dead until his brains look like ground beef. Vrykola, who would name a kid that?

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DizzasterJuice
23rd Aug 2016, 7:14 PM

Vyrkola is a very respected family name, if you're a lava toad.

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chk
22nd Aug 2016, 7:05 PM

Good to see you back at the drawing board.

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DizzasterJuice
23rd Aug 2016, 7:12 PM

Yeah, sorry about being so unreliable lately. I'm dealing with some RL issues right now.

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Jan
23rd Aug 2016, 12:10 PM

I think that system critical going to save Vyrkola lol

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Steve O
23rd Aug 2016, 2:31 PM

Let's hope so because otherwise it really doesn't look good for the good guys.

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DizzasterJuice
23rd Aug 2016, 7:10 PM

I only kill one person per chapter and I just killed Jennings so they should be fine. *evil laugh*

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Steve O
24th Aug 2016, 7:44 AM

Now I'm going to have to back and re-read the whole story just to see if that is correct.

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Steve O
26th Aug 2016, 9:05 AM

Just finished my re-read. I didn't count the "red shirts", the Leung and Meg Cheng guards and solders. Basically anyone without a name.

Here's my list
In chapter 5 you killed Neela and Breone in the fight with the dargons.
In chapter 6 it was Kaydee
In chapter 7 the Lenug witch and King and Broqa
In 10 the Lenug assassin (could have been a red shirt his skull get more frame than he did)
In 11 you killed Mirrame (what a waste!)
In 12 prince Karamata bought it and the countess got hers
and in 16 you just killed Jennings.

That's only 11 in 16 so you need 5 more kills just to make a one per average. I didn't count the two scientists in the prehistoric teraforming station, but that would still leave a deficit of 3.


I'm such a nerd :(

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DizzasterJuice
26th Aug 2016, 11:03 AM

Dang, I better get busy killing then.

That Leung assassin was actually Sellah's husband Rullock. He went to keep an eye on Mirrame but Lennare mistook him as a spy. That's why Sellah killed the Countess.

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Steve O
29th Aug 2016, 1:15 PM

That explains how he got dead.

Not to be racist, but the Leung all look alike to me.

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Boren
26th Aug 2016, 6:36 PM

Rip the villeins arm off and beat him to death with it, is there any better way to make sure? lol

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