Chapter 14

Chapter 14




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DizzasterJuice
7th Sep 2015, 11:34 AM

I added an extra panel from this page to the incentive pages on the TWC vote button.

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moizmad
7th Sep 2015, 4:03 PM

It looks like a throne but it's actually her toilet, and those are her wipers at hand.

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DizzasterJuice
8th Sep 2015, 12:36 AM

Pretty much like an Al Bundy throne.

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xpacetrue
8th Sep 2015, 6:58 AM

Speaking of "wipers at hand", I'm reminded of 2:05 into this Mitt Romney Style (Gangnam Style Parody) video. ^_^

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princess_lom
7th Sep 2015, 4:26 PM

that look good, I enjoyed that page, little bit creepy

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DizzasterJuice
8th Sep 2015, 12:35 AM

It's a pretty creepy place.

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xpacetrue
8th Sep 2015, 4:16 PM

As others have said, this page looks great. The lighting is excellent. And I love the cave look, particularly how the floor gently slopes towards the throne. It looks natural while still adding importance to the throne.

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MaiLyng
13th Oct 2015, 10:29 PM

Kinda looks like an arena, like maybe this is where they fight for ranks?

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jamie59
7th Sep 2015, 5:20 PM

Hochi 3 would kill you. You might have a smile on your face but you'd be just as dead.

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DizzasterJuice
8th Sep 2015, 12:33 AM

He should let the big head do the thinking, or just listen to Liam.

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Dongaria
7th Sep 2015, 10:07 PM

Mother fucker, this shit looks so good compared to all the other CGI comics out there, this is just consistently awesome. The people like you who kick ass at CGI comics seem to really have down: framing, lighting and character design. This shit looks great.

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DizzasterJuice
8th Sep 2015, 12:32 AM

Thanks! I appreciate that, and just for that you get a sneak peek at Khamon Nylah. She makes Khamon Broqa look like a nun. ;)
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xpacetrue
8th Sep 2015, 6:44 AM

Makes Khamon Broqa look like a nun?! That's saying something. Broqa was a real piece of work - the kind of character one loves to hate.

Or are you implying that Nylah is a talented seducer?

Edit: Since they both share the title "Khamon", does that term mean they are a Priestess, a Prophetess, or a Witch/Magic Practitioner?

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DizzasterJuice
8th Sep 2015, 5:07 PM

I'm just going to say that Nylah will be fun to hate.

On page 47 Liri described a khamon as a powerful battle-witch that heal the wounded and cast spells in battle. In a few other places it was said that khamon can consult the spirit wells to see into the future. If the khamon can interpret the spirit visions correctly they could become very powerful, but more often than not the messages are unclear and confusing. Broqa correctly predicted the death of her assistant Breone but not her own death.

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princess_lom
8th Sep 2015, 6:51 PM

omg she's having a hairs xD

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jerrie
8th Sep 2015, 4:55 PM

Like Dongaria said...this comic is consistently awesome.

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Steven-Vincent
11th Sep 2015, 4:55 PM

I love the mood lighting here. You do a very good job with using the lighting to convey feeling and emotion.

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