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DizzasterJuice
28th Jul 2014, 4:35 PM

I'm posting new episodes of WhiteOut on Mondays and Thursdays also so check it out.

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Midtoon
28th Jul 2014, 2:36 PM

Wondering why she didn't just run out after the cats... The guards didn't seem to be on the ready.

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DizzasterJuice
28th Jul 2014, 4:37 PM

You have a point, they seem pretty inept. But then they're probably fast runners and they have axes.

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moizmad
28th Jul 2014, 3:31 PM

Sabre-toothed leopards and a tiger, beautiful cats, I love them!

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DizzasterJuice
28th Jul 2014, 4:51 PM

Lots of cats in this story... and cat-people... and dog-people.
I keep promising to tell the story of the Mag Dalai and how their story was inspired by the Florida Seminole Tribe so I'll do that between chapters. There's only 1 page left in this chapter so it will be next Monday.

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cattservant
28th Jul 2014, 4:21 PM

Who let the Cats out!

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DizzasterJuice
28th Jul 2014, 4:53 PM

meow, meow, meow, meow
sorry... I just had to do the chorus.

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cattservant
28th Jul 2014, 5:05 PM

Of chorus!

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jamie59
28th Jul 2014, 10:48 PM

Look it's a dog carpet.

She could try airtight. It would be quickest..

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Steven-Vincent
8th May 2015, 5:22 PM

I don't understand why the guards did not react more severely to the fleeing cats. I would have thought they'd raise an alarm at this point.

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DizzasterJuice
8th May 2015, 6:20 PM

Because they're the idiot comic relief in this story. lol
Seriously though, I was thinking "what would I do?" when I was writing it. They are their pets so they're not going to try to kill them. And it's not like chasing after your pet kitten when it gets out either. These pets bite. The cat handler said earlier that they always come back when they get hungry so I guess I would just stand there and look stupid too.

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Steven-Vincent
8th May 2015, 9:14 PM

I guess I can understand that.

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