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cattservant
8th Mar 2014, 3:50 PM

Of course she bit him!

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DizzasterJuice
8th Mar 2014, 8:27 PM

I've been wanting to do this part of the story since we talked about how violent cat sex was back in chapter 3.

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Dragonrider
8th Mar 2014, 5:27 PM

Theese ees as she planned from the start she ess fertile and she ees in heat. Damn Liam you should have changed into an alley cat the way you act around women. With this guy's record so far how did he end up with a crew of all females? Sexual harassment would have had to kick in somewhere.

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jamie59
8th Mar 2014, 8:13 PM

How is it sexual harassment when the girls are throwing themsalves at Liam. Even this is a setup on her part.

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DizzasterJuice
8th Mar 2014, 8:35 PM

In the original story it was explained that women were preferred in space travel because of lower body weight but that was written before the space shuttle even. Since then NASA hasn't been too concerned about body weight so it doesn't make much sense now.

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DizzasterJuice
8th Mar 2014, 8:48 PM

And no one commented on the fact that the Minkies are half human and half Dalai! That was the whole point of this page... but I guess the sex was a distraction. =)

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Dragonrider
8th Mar 2014, 10:43 PM

Actually I was just coming back to ask is this the first or second human galactic expansion? If it's the second then the humans were cut off here when the original Empire broke up and forgotten, the AIS that ran things for them went slightly insane from loneliness and that's the reason it's acting as it does. Second, there was a colony ship dropped in the crease and that was where the Mag Mala came from, again the AIS went batty from loneliness until the doggies evolved enough to respond to it.
Or third neither of ther above.

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Dragonrider
8th Mar 2014, 10:46 PM

Also I did comment on the hybrid, I said this is happening just as she planned when she went into heat and was fertile.

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JustSomeGuy
11th Mar 2014, 11:08 AM

I guess it seemed sort of obvious that the Mikies were half Dalai, half Human. Given the various other surprises that have already been revealed about this world, it makes perfect sense.

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Malcadon
9th Mar 2014, 2:17 AM

"Once bitten, [Yokai Shiguri] can detect the scent of [her] victim from as far as five kilometers... And the pursuit of [her] pray is relentless."

Damn! There is nothing we can do for him now. You will be remembered... *draws bow*

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