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DizzasterJuice
1st Jul 2016, 8:56 PM

I'm currently on vacation but I'll be back sometime in late July. Sorry for the lack of notice but something came up unexpectedly.

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jamie59
16th Jun 2016, 8:28 PM

Going to cripple her but leave her alive?

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Steve O
17th Jun 2016, 9:23 AM

He needs the access codes to the shuttle.

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Dragonrider
16th Jun 2016, 10:20 PM

Ahhhh, Ooooppppss?

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xpacetrue
17th Jun 2016, 1:35 AM

This bot has gun arms instead of hands. I'm impressed to see him use his four legs like this. And rather smart if taking enemies alive is his mission.

However, even for a robot, this seems a bit... strange? Kirby did jump to the ground to dodge the beam, but she was neither pinned nor unconscious. Yet, somehow, he smashed both an arm and a leg. She's a military cyborg trained to take on robots and enemies larger than herself. After the first impact, I would think she would try to roll out of the way or something, instead of staying prone to get hit again.

Then he lifts her up by her leg... with his leg? Do his legs have pincers on the end? Even so, it seem a bit weird.

Meanwhile, why did the gunfire stop? Big Boy went invisible. But her commander, at least, should still be firing.

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DizzasterJuice
17th Jun 2016, 10:12 AM

It's hard to show action with still action frames, but Demigos is much faster than he looks. All of this happened in seconds.

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xpacetrue
17th Jun 2016, 8:35 PM

But... He's huge, made almost entirely of metal, has armor heavy enough to stop all but the highest caliber guns, and he can move too fast for even a cyborg soldier to be able to dodge? (Or did she fumble her reflex check?) How can almost a ton of metal walk so quietly, yet so extremely fast? It kind of reminds me of the diabolical stuff our old GM would pull on our party. :D

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kenm
17th Jul 2016, 11:43 PM

What software do you use to produce this story? It's amazingly well done - very professional.

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Jan
17th Jun 2016, 5:21 AM

beauteful battle pic. but I thought Kirby would have rolled out of his reach. she must have a smaller weapon too

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DizzasterJuice
17th Jun 2016, 10:14 AM

He's too fast for her.

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Remember your training, help you it can.

Steve O
17th Jun 2016, 3:42 PM

Time to remember what Lt Commander Lockerbie said - fight dirty!

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moizmad
17th Jun 2016, 9:14 PM

She could go for a bare-naked choke hold!

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Nef
20th Jun 2016, 5:31 PM

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Well, I don't know if she feels, but that would certainly seems destructive...

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Bness
9th Jul 2016, 4:05 PM

Great comic, thank you for all the dedicated work! I'm usually not a fan of digitally modeled comics, or humanoid animals, but this is wonderful. The mythology and technology woven into the adventure story adds nice depth. How long does it take to make a page?

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BrocknessMonster
11th Jul 2016, 4:16 AM

Is there an archive of past vote incentives?

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